tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3941000269770860700.post1067438154680885735..comments2009-07-07T08:59:06.550-07:00kerrihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06711256923096526209noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3941000269770860700.post-58544804253720602612009-07-07T08:59:06.550-07:002009-07-07T08:59:06.550-07:00What I love about this poem was how it made me feel- cozy and safe.<br />I may have done this exact thing at some time in my life, but if I hadn&#39;t, I know I would want to after reading this.<br />:)<br />xoRed Birdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14287107184977896696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3941000269770860700.post-82308907594819412872009-07-07T05:04:06.847-07:002009-07-07T05:04:06.847-07:00I like the structure to this piece, the way the bears and the leeches are separated encouraging you to slow down and read each line carefully, at least that&#39;s how I responded to it.<br /><br />Not sure about the semicolon before &#39;trustingly&#39; though. Maybe a dash instead?Jim Murdochhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12786388638146471193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3941000269770860700.post-79103736119456536362009-07-06T09:54:57.909-07:002009-07-06T09:54:57.909-07:00i like thisEllehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12298955145864739659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3941000269770860700.post-14224295624957806022009-07-06T08:11:12.952-07:002009-07-06T08:11:12.952-07:00I really like this-- may I post it in my blog at www.picturecamping.com? Of course, I&#39;ll credit you as author and link back to your site.<br /><br />Thanks for considering this,<br /><br />Jean B. in SCRichard and Jeanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13241996059106627425noreply@blogger.com