Wednesday, July 1, 2009

kerala

i watched the rain lash down in the grassmarket,
as if it had discovered the meaning of life
and i remembered the frogs and the smell of chai

3 comments:

  1. This is the kind of theme that others might have been tempted to try and cram into a haiku - it certainly has that feel - but allowing it to breathe gives it its own flavour and a it has a very nice rhythm too.
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  2. Chai...lovely, lovely chai
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  3. Oh, just beautiful- so sensual!
    xo
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