Monday, July 6, 2009

a crown

i
wear a hat
upon
my head
that is
made from
an
old newspaper

-the words
and faded imagery more smudged
than the face
of any
wee girl
you have seen
who has
been
crying
for a
long
long
time.

it is
tied around my
chin
with ribbon
that is
old
and yellow;
we don't
really know
where we
found it
anymore.

when others look at me
they may
think of parties
from days long
gone
by;
jubilees
and
lemonade.

but i know
that you and me
will
always remember
the chips
we shared
together
one sunday,
battling our way over
water
on a cold summer
night;
wrapped
in
very
old
newspaper.

3 comments:

  1. Delightful imagery. Ties together nicely. Not sure about 'you and me' mind. 'You and I' works better for me but your narrator might not be as fussy.
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  2. There is something quite melancholy-ish about this... and I loved the structure of this, it's cascading to the final "newspaper."
    So good, my friend. I LOVE your poetry and the depth of feeling you bring to each poem.
    xo
    p.s. so glad to have found you... :)
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  3. I always lovelovelove your poetry.
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